In the book “ LONG WAY DOWN” by Jason Reynolds WIll and Shawn Hollowman live in a neighborhood prone to crime neither of them has been personaly targeted until one day when Shawn was shot and killed. In their neighborhood they have three rules for when someone they love die, rule number one is don’t cry, rule number two is don’t snitch, and rule number three is revenge, kill the person who killed your loved one. After Shawn died Will had every intent to follow the rules but he came into some obsticles when he when down the elevated to get revenge but on every level a person who died following the rules came into the elevator, Will knew every person who got on somehow. Will lived on the 8th floor, on the 7th floor Buck got in, on the 6th floor Dani got in, 5th floor was Uncle Mark, 4th floor was Mikey holloman their father, 3rd floor was Frick, and lastly on the 2nd floor was Shawn. There are many theory as to who was the biggest impact on Will, It could be argued Shawn had the biggest impact on Will. Shawn has the biggest impact on Will. Shawn taught Will the rules after his childhood friend Dani died. Will explains that the rules are passed through his family and Will is the only one left alive. “Passed …show more content…
Ever sense Will was a child he he looked up to Will, “When we were kids I would follow Shawn around the apartment” (289). When little children look up to someone theu often follow them arround and copy them. Which is what Wil lwas doing with Shawn at the time. Which shows Shawn has the biggest impact on Will. Shawn could do a few tricks that Will and his friends thought were cool, “Shawn could so both so he was the king around here to me and tony and all our friends”(54). Will said that Shawn was the King which he wouldnt have said if he didnt look up to him. In the quote it shows that Will thought Shawn was cool bu the way he talked about him, not just in this quote but throughout the
It becomes evident to Will that following in Shawn’s footsteps could have negative implications. The object that Will uses as a reminder of his brother shows Shawn’s flaws, “I wrapped my fingers [around the gun] / placing them over Shawn’s / little brother holding big brother’s hand” (Reynold 64). The relationship between the gun with both brothers and the brothers’ relationship to one another is made evident with Will’s actions. Will covering Shawn’s fingerprints with his own symbolizes his lack of preparedness to carry out the plan. Due to the fact that the gun brings back dreadful memories of an imperfect Shawn; Will decides not to follow his brother's path in an effort to end the cycle of violence that has perpetuated in his family.
I know that we would all benefit from an attitude. William is a good role model for
Will is trying to follow these rules, but he runs into problems when people give him reasons not to. Mikey Holloman (dad) has the biggest impact with stating important things; for example, he makes Will question if he has the right person; what if someone comes for him after killing this guy? Will he be able to handle it? Mikey also uses his own experience for getting revenge for his brother’s murder; he tells Will how he was 100% sure he had the right person but ended up killing an innocent person. They
Will Shawn’s experiences and guidance help Will, or will it lead him astray? The first reason why Shawn has the biggest impact on Will is because he’s an older brother/father figure to Will. For example, a quote in the book states “ Shawn was my big brother, my best friend, my protector. He was the only one who always looked out for me, no matter what” (Reynolds, 21).
Will then knew it was ok to break them because Shawn was not only Will’s older brother, but he was also his father figure. He was Will’s mentor and took him under his wing. Shawn starts to cry which is breaking rule #1. “Rule 1 No Crying”(Reynolds 31). This evidence supports my argument because it talks about how Shawn broke the unspoken rules and that it is okay to break them.
Motivation- Will gets motivated when he messes up on a running play, or if he doesn’t gain as much yards as he thinks he can. His dad also motivates him, and how Will wants to be a better player than his
One day, she got killed by a nearby shootout while they were playing, which ultimately altered Will's entire childhood and life. It impelled Shawn to teach him about the "rules "and adulthood because his childhood was already beginning to collapse on itself. The reason is that he just witnessed his best friend dying in front of him and described it as, "Her eyes wide, / the brightness dimming. / Her mouth, open.
Frick emphasizes the way Shawn went to follow the rules. This may have worried Will more and would cause him to break the rules. Furthermore, Shawn enters the elevator. He doesn’t say a word to Will until the elevator door opens. “. . . finally spoke to me.
1. No crying 2. No snitching and 3. The most important of them all… Seek revenge. So Will followed the rules.
It is evident that Will has gone through some tough times, and he is going to ameliorate the pain he feels by getting revenge for the murder of his brother. But as the elevator changes from floor to floor, a new character is introduced. Each character means something to Will but is now dead. In the book, on page 304, it states, “I caught my breath as Buck, Dani, Uncle Mark, Pop, Frick, and Shawn chased behind it. The L button no longer lit”(Reynolds, 304).
This might lead to Will not wanting to make the same mistake his father did and reconsider killing Riggs. Perhaps, he might try to find evidence on why it might be Riggs that killed his brother, Shawn. In short, Mikey’s mistake might stop Will from following the rules and end the ongoing cycle of violence. In addition, Will’s father is a distinguished character in Will’s decision because he allows him to experience what it’s like to be at the edge of death. As Mikey goes in to hug Will, he reaches his hand down to Will’s waist, grabs the gun, and puts it to his head.
Shawn introduced the rules to Will since he experienced something traumatic firsthand, hoping this would prepare him for the if inevitable outcome of taking revenge for a loved one. Although Will did not take revenge for Dani, the rules finally applied to Will when Shawn was murdered in front of Will. Gun violence played a major role in the way Will copes with situations and the way he makes rational decisions as a teenager that is exposed to frequent gun abuse that happens in his
One big way to improve Will’s communication is to deal with the relationship violence that occurred to him. Sean started this for him in the scene where he tried to get Will to see that his upbringing was not his fault. This was a big step for Will to understand himself and how he should see his relationships. Through Sean, Will also learned some emotional understanding of himself. Emotional understanding will allow him to have emotional competence.
”(Reynolds 31). Will follows the rule of no crying strictly along with the rest of the men and boys in the community. This leads to crying being frowned upon and rare. Will then talks about an interaction with his father where he says, “Eye to eye, a tear streaming down his face. Just one
During the film Will demonstrates anger as well as irritability in a short tempered manner. In a particular scene, Will becomes overwhelmed with anger after encountering an old classmate who bullied him in preschool. Such anger and irritability caused Will’s mind to become blocked during the violent act in which Will also assaults an office. The incident ultimately leads Will unraveling the root of the